This circle excludes Sammamish from the map... if we reference it, the window needs to move
jjarango Oct 1 2025 at 2:55PM on page 4
Not high enough contrast for this header
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:51PM on page 16
Color contrast w/ paper is not great here
jjarango Oct 1 2025 at 2:51PM on page 1
Sarah - do we want to have the date here? Just in case we end up using it later so it doesn't look out of date.
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:50PM on page 12
probably should not capitalize in this use
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:48PM on page 8
Perhaps add "by income band"?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:47PM on page 8
Image failed to render?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:46PM on page 7
Nitpick - because the colors are the same, I was expecting to see cost burdened renters or owners in the blue and orange buildings when I shifted to the next image, and then was a bit disoriented when I realized it was actually a totally separate topic
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:45PM on page 7
image failed to render?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:44PM on page 4
Font changes color and then also changes weight, it looks sort of odd, and contrast-wise is harder to read than the black
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:42PM on page 3
comma
Emily Oct 1 2025 at 2:42PM on page 4
Inconsistent margins?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:42PM on page 3
Do we need to cite ourselves, we don't do it in a lot of the rest of the document?
Emily Oct 1 2025 at 2:41PM on page 8
picture?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:41PM on page 2
Nitpick - left align?
Emily Oct 1 2025 at 2:40PM on page 7
picture?
Emily Oct 1 2025 at 2:40PM on page 6
this heading style could use just a bit more differentiation, maybe a bit more bold?
Matt Campbell Oct 1 2025 at 2:39PM on page 2
Comment type "nitpick" not an option, but this could be something cliche but effective, like a lightbulb or a pencil or a map or really any monoline drawing or icon
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